Landing Page Copy - Transparency Is Important
• What Is Transparency? Simply Put … It’s Honesty •
• Why You Should Provide Information About Your Online Business Policies & Procdures •
In my dealings with clients who are newbie website owners, and even with those that have had sites for a long time, I have to spend a fair amount of time coaching these clients about creating quality content for their sites. Not only does my conversation include SEO issues and keyword phrase usage best practices, but also many other facets that comprise a well written page of content.
Since these website owners have a site specifically for the purpose of providing them with an online presence in order to generate income, there will likely be two, three or more pages on their site that can be considered to be a “landing page”.
Here’s my blog post about landing pages, what they are, and what purpose they serve: all about landing pages.
Your Landing Page Copy Needs To Be Transparent
What do I mean by transparent? In landing page tech-talk, this means to be honest and provide your site’s visitors with the important facts they ought to know about things such as:
- The nature of your business – what do you offer? Products and/or services?
- How you intend to use a visitor’s personal information – meaning what is your privacy policy?
- What is your shipping policy? Domestic only? Or international? USPS, UPS, Fed Ex, etc.? Overnight, standard delivery, 2nd-day delivery options?
- Your return policy?
- If you’re offering a special discount or coupon – what are the particulars as to how you do/don’t honor these specials?
- How do you charge your customers? This isn’t just the methods of payment accepted (credit cards, e-checks, PayPal, etc.) but additional information such as stating you only charge for items shipped or services received; that back-ordered items are only charged once they are shipped.
There are also other “transparent” pieces of information you would do well to explain and/or provide, too:
- If you require a registration (log-in and password must be created to access a certain section of your site), explain why you require this.
- If a special piece of software needs to be installed, explain why and ask permission to proceed with the install; and explain how it can be easily uninstalled, too.
- Don’t send unsolicited mailings – allow the customer to opt-in for your newsletter, special deals emails, even snail-mails.
And one more thing that I don’t run into very often, but there are still websites out there doing this unprofessional (in my opinion) tactic so it is worth mentioning here:
- Don’t disable the functionality of the browser back button! (I really dislike it when a site has implemented this annoying feature.) If a visitor wants to exit your site, be polite and allow it!
As is very truly said: You can’t please ALL of the people ALL of the time!
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About providing a privacy policy … any and every website that asks for any type of sensitive information - from something as simple as an email address and first name, or on-up-to very detailed information such as credit card numbers should have a privacy policy page in place!
Here’s a free online tool that allows you to create a professional privacy page that is based upon the guidelines of the Direct Marketing Association: click here. It even provides the HTML code, so all you have to do is copy and paste the policy into your website page template and voila! Your webpage is done and ready for you to upload.
For a example of how you might like to provide your privacy policy, look at the one on my SEO-Innovation.com website.
The content on each landing page, also referred to as the landing page copy, serves a particular purpose, as I’ve already stated. Whether you will need to implement some, or all of the above depends (of course) on the purpose of your site. An e-commerce site will most likely need to have all of the suggested information in place, whereas a mini-site that promotes a digital product may only need to provide their privacy policy and ordering procedure guidelines.
No matter what purpose your website serves, always remember to over-deliver the quality of information. It is much better to tell your visitors a little more than they might need to know, than not enough!

Well, I do! I didn’t used to a few years ago. Honestly. Oh sure, I would say I wanted this or that good thing to happen to me, or that I wished my finances would improve, or that I hoped that new opportunities of one sort or another would come knocking at my door, but I just didn’t have a true spirit of positiveness and positive thinking instilled into the deepest core of my thought patterns.
